团团同学
Even if the sun ceases to exist/shine, my love for you is still eternal. Darling, I love you, would you please marry me?
即使太阳不复存在/不再发光,我对你的爱还是永恒的。亲爱的,我....
避免用Destroy,较为不吉利的言辞。
或者:
Even if the sun ceases to shine, my love for you will still shine. Darling, I love you, would you please marry me?
小鱼
单刀直入法
Will you marry me?
你愿意嫁给(娶)我吗?
Would you be my wife/husband?
你愿意当我的妻子/丈夫吗?
迂回暗示法
I think it's time we took some vows.
我想是我们该许下誓言的时候了。
I think it's time we settled down...
我想是我们该稳定下来的时候了......
I want to spend the rest of my life with you.
我要与你共度余生。
I want to be with you forever.
我要永远与你相守。
咬文嚼字法
Let's get hitched!
我们成为比翼鸟吧!
Let's tie the knot!
我们结为连理枝吧!
强迫中奖法
I want to have your children.
我要跟你生宝宝。
Will you marry me?你愿意嫁给我吗?
Would you be my wife?你愿意当我的妻子吗?
或者你尽管心中对她的热爱已如波涛般汹涌,却仍然因为害羞而开不了口,你可以表达的含蓄点儿——
Let's tie the knot!我们结为连理枝吧!
I want to spend the rest of my life with you.我要与你共度余生。
Let's be a pair of lovebirds!让我们做比翼鸟吧!
I think it's time we settled down...我想是我们该稳定下来的时候了……
I want to spend the rest of my life with you.我要与你共度余生。
如此便好i
我觉得用destroy有点生硬;forever是副词,应用形容词,可以改为eternal("永恒的, 永远的").
个人建议:Even the sun will fade out, but my love for you is eternal. Darling, i love you, would you please marry me?
或: Even the sun will fade out, but my love for you will never die. Darling, i love you, would you please marry me?
p.s. Good luck with your proposal~~~~
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Will you marry me?你愿意嫁给我吗?
Would you be my wife?你愿意当我的妻子吗?
Let's tie the knot!我们结为连理枝吧!
I want to spend the rest of my life with you.我要与你共度余生。
亖三二一
楼主语气确实不好/.